Paper 1 I felt like was successful in the end. Including the community aspect into my thesis which added more of an audience feel was a definite plus. I decided to eliminate the minor bit about TED’s history because it was no longer relevant to my tweaked thesis. The process went well overall after I finally found a moment of clarity and some examples to back up my claims. So I believe that it concluded well and I hope that my next paper will be even smoother than this previous paper.