Problem Paragraph for Paper 1

“With bringing so many ideas to the table, TED also has a community section on its page. This page features all kinds of people from across the planet with backgrounds that are viable to whatever subject you type in or want to research. You can also search for a specific member of the community if you’re interested in a particular person’s background. This part of the blogging site helps connect bright minds and allows people to learn from one another. “


For one I understand that this short because it is rough but I don’t know if bringing in the community aspect of the blog would be a good idea or not. I was also going to bring into the paragraph or the next one some of the history of the blog but I’m not entirely sure if that’s pertinent to the goal of the assignment. 


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